My mind speaketh....

Not a professional writer.... though aspire to be one.. A dreamer.. who believes it is important to dream before converting them into actions...

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Location: Agra, New Delhi, India

Friday, February 13, 2009

An Ode to Love....

She is standing on the ground, as he climbed over me…
With her watery eyes, she is praying God to prevent him falling free…
He finally plucked it for her, but fell straight on the Earth...
With bloodied knees and muddy face, presented his token of ‘love’ to her..

The kids are in their teens now, with all the charm on their face…
She is most beautiful girl around, with all the grace..
Embracing her Prince Charming, standing under my shade…
I wish O mighty Lord, their love just never fade…

I now see them as the cutest couple of “Husband-Wife”…
Though they are looking at the Sun, at the dusk of their life…
With toothless jaws and shivering body, their soul is still full of bliss..
He touched her wrinkled forehead, and planted a gentle kiss..

It is rainy, windy and chilly….
Even I am frozen, as the land is hilly….
Their bodies are lying motionless, calm and subtle..
She is still beautiful, and he is still gentle…

Love is selfless, caring and pure…
As they hug each other, buried deep near my roots…
Even this “Mango Tree” now understands and say…
To all the humans out there, a Happy Valentine’s Day

20 Comments:

Blogger Manish said...

Just can't believe if its your own creativity!
Simply no comments as I was never ready to read such a beautyful art from you. Toooooooooo Gooooooooood! :)

10:31 PM  
Blogger The Virtual Creative Crack Pot said...

Too good man!!!would love to read more...

10:35 PM  
Blogger mohit said...

Very creatively expressed.

4:15 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

awesum yaar...u r absolutely fantastic...jus too gud....im short of words....!!

11:01 PM  
Blogger Tarun said...

thanks.... all of you :)

12:56 AM  
Blogger Garry said...

Hey Tarun...y didnt u give thid for bofa valentine writing contest ?

2:21 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Great job...very well written!!! I hope you blog more often..

11:50 AM  
Blogger Tia said...

hey dude...
its awesome. really hats of to u.
so creative nd xpressive.

4:39 PM  
Blogger Manish said...

Hey congratulations for winning prize on this sweet poem... The best poet of Bank Of America! :)

5:39 PM  
Blogger vikas said...

Bahut badhiya tarun bhai.......
excellent poem......
i can see the a great upcoming poet in u......
valentines day ke mauke par aapke liye:

"यूँ बोलो कुछ झँक्रित कर दो हर इक मन का इक-इक तार;
पास नही कुछ भी हो चाहे साथ हमेशा रखना प्यार;
सार यही समझा है हमने,प्यार बिना जीवन नि:सार;
मित्र आपको बहुत मुबारक ,प्रेम दिवस का ये त्योहार्।

4:16 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice poem! Beautifully expressed..

7:30 PM  
Blogger Himanshu Bajaj said...

Its seems somebody is in love !!

8:33 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Beutiful creativity... great !

11:01 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I liked it... really touching. Where can I read more from you?

11:08 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I was just browing through for some good poems... and got to here... Good one man!

11:12 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Arre sahi... tum likhte bhi ho... college me to kabhi nahi sunaya?... anyways, congrats for sweet poem and the prize :)

11:14 PM  
Blogger Tarun said...

Thanks again all of you... :)

didnt realize that a poem written in 1.5 hrs can be so much appreciated ...

@Vandana: Can't recognize you?? College mein?? kuchh yaad nahin aa raha...

4:46 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey... don't know how I reached to your blog that day... but sahi hai... IIM ja ke PGRS ko bhul gaye...
Btw, I revisited this page looking for something new. seems kabhi kabhi hi likhte ho?

11:38 AM  
Blogger Tarun said...

@Vandana: tried hard... sorry yaar, still cant recall !!

anyways... I updated my blogpage, dont know how you missed it :)

gimme your mail ID or any contact details... at least pata to chale who is this frnd of mine..

1:29 PM  
Blogger sonia said...

kaha se copy paste kiya...ha ha ha..great..too gud..cant believable ke tum aaisa bhi likh sakte ho....

5:15 PM  

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